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Hans Castorp's avatar

Very nice article. Informative and well written. Sometimes though, it reads as if the inserted quotes don't really fit into the sentence.

For example:

"In Fëanor is also embodied a revolutionary orator, a demagogue, who gather the Noldor with torches and convinces them to leave <<Fëanor was a master of words, and his tongue had great power over hearts when he would use it; and that night he made a speech before the Noldor which they ever remembered. Fierce and few were his words, and filled with anger and pride; and hearing them the Noldor were stirred to madness.>>"

Just wanted to let you know, perhaps my English just isn't that great. Still, very nice article, I enjoy all your work.

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Andrej Kolárik's avatar

Indeed, thanks for pointing out! Especially in this article, it appears that there was room for making the inclusion of the quotes more smooth

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